I really like the interplay between bassline and melody I like the feel of the track the drum work is nice and kept my interest from start to finish nice effort mate.
Why thank you! This makes me feel better after what seemed like the longest day of my life.
Good track a few suggestions
nice oldskool feel you got going on I would perhaps suggest a counter break and take a tiny bit of the overdrive of that rhodes it's a little too muddy although it's a nice progression.
Not sure you need the half time drums middle eight I would take some of the predelay of your reverb although I like the break I feel it would benefit from some underlining groove perhaps a tambourine and cymbal line. I think you need to simplify the structure too although I really like the second break perhaps you could look at bringing it in the overdrive is nice but I would suggest limiting it a little as there is way too much bandwidth.
You've pretty much got a topline going on I reckon this track would really benefit from vocals. I really like the hook though it draws you in and keeps you interested a great piece of work man.
aphex twin on antideppresents I love it
What a description!
I really like what you're doing that breakdown fucking rocks I think you've got that minimal techno crossover thing going on really well love the sparseness I would perhaps consider a different snare although it sits reasonably it's very lacking in energy.
I would perhaps consider adding a few percussive elements too although I appreciate you don't want to go overboard as that would detract from the overall feel of the tune.
Thanks man! Yah I see what you mean about the snare. I'll try different snare sounds as well as add a few more drum sounds. and thanks for the helpful review! :)
like what you're doing
Would you consider allowing me to remix this track?
Well you can. But make sure to give me credit. by giving away the link to my user page yourix.newgrounds.com as long as you do that.
You can knock yourself out!
And thanks for the comment!
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